I think that your presentation is done pretty well. I really like the images you have chosen to use, Your visuals really do help to guide the thinking on your theory rather than jsut illustrations. As for a clear topic, I see that you are talking about "the demise of the author" when using the Internet, but i think you need to use another topic to demonstrate this. For example, you explain how we post picutures and text on the Web, but use a specific website, such as Facebook or You tube to really explain your theories. You do a create job at making assertions and claims, rather than just explaining your topic, but at the same time pick a topic to at least address. You could incorporate Social Media into your presentation to fit your theory. Also make sure to check grammatical mistakes efore the final one is due Other than those sugestions, I really liked your presentation!
Hi Kimberly! I think that your presentation has an interesting layout, but I am not 100% sure what exactly you are theorizing on here. I know that the "demise of the author" is the main subject, but I think you can expand on your theory and the "so what" of the project. I think the graphics are interesting as well as entertaining and I think you have a great presentation here it just needs some editing and expansion.
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I think that your presentation is done pretty well. I really like the images you have chosen to use, Your visuals really do help to guide the thinking on your theory rather than jsut illustrations. As for a clear topic, I see that you are talking about "the demise of the author" when using the Internet, but i think you need to use another topic to demonstrate this. For example, you explain how we post picutures and text on the Web, but use a specific website, such as Facebook or You tube to really explain your theories. You do a create job at making assertions and claims, rather than just explaining your topic, but at the same time pick a topic to at least address. You could incorporate Social Media into your presentation to fit your theory. Also make sure to check grammatical mistakes efore the final one is due Other than those sugestions, I really liked your presentation!
Hi Kimberly! I think that your presentation has an interesting layout, but I am not 100% sure what exactly you are theorizing on here. I know that the "demise of the author" is the main subject, but I think you can expand on your theory and the "so what" of the project. I think the graphics are interesting as well as entertaining and I think you have a great presentation here it just needs some editing and expansion.
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